Feedback for Main Sequence

I recevied feedback from my class for my opening sequence
I receieved good feedback and got told which ways I can improve my sequence to make it better.

Good Feedback
Good music
Tension
The spinning at the end of the scene

Ways to improve
Better acting at the end of the clip
The shots could have been longer because they were too short
Ending spoilt the opening sequence (because it showed that it was a dream)
Music could have increased to add more tention.
Had a better style of text

Shot composition 2 3 3 2 2 2
Mise en scene 3 3 2 3 4
Editing 3 2 4 3 3 3
Sound and music 3 1 1 1 3 2
Font and text 4 3 3 2 4 4